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Riley
Basics
1. Does your character have a long, rare or unusual name? [ or if she has a name that reflects your own name] +1
Well its meant to be kind of alieny? +1
2. Does your character have more than one name they go by? [not counting nick names] +1
3. [count all that apply]
She`s not a human? +1 (Yep)
Half a human?
[half]An Angel?
[half]A Vampire? (Yesh)
[half]A Werewolf?
4. She belongs to a royal family? +1
5. Does she have amnesia? +1
It heals as the story goes on? +1
Looks
1. She has very long hair or hair with unusual color? +1
Is she blonde? +1
2. She has wings? +1
3. She is not overweight though she doesnt look after what she eats/ doesnt exercise +1
4. Her bra size is B ? +2 ( Wha? I don't specify my character's cup size!)
5. Does she belong to some kind of label? [ex. Punk, Goth, Lolita, Emo, Prep, etc.]+2
7. Do you describe her looks in the first chapter? +1
Do you use words "gorgeous" "mysterious" "stunning" "beautiful" "perfect" when describing her? +1 (uh...yeah
Past
1. She had a terrible past +1 (yes)
and she angst about it +1 (yes!
2. Is she an orphan? +1
3. Was she physically abused? +1
Mentally abused? +1
Raped? +1
All the other characters know that +1
5. She saw a death of her family member +1 (No, but of a close friend, yes)
Character
1. She has a very dark or very cheery character +1 (She's a little depressed at the moment, but that's not her usual self)
2. She has no enemies +1
3. She has no friends +1
4. She has a "big point of view" [ex. "It`s ok that my BF left me, there are so many other boys in the world"] +1
5. She has a best friend that stays that way during all the story?
6. Everyone who dislikes her ends up humiliated, arrested and/or dead +1
Killed by her +1
Killed by her boyfriend +1
7. She always understands others and gives the answer to any problem of their life +1
8. She shares same characteristics/hobbies with a cannon character +1
Romance
1. Your character seems to have more romance than all the other characters in the story +1 (well, yeah!)
2. Her boyfriend is a cannon character +1
more than one cannon character +1
a character from a cannon couple +1
a character you would like to have as boyfriend +1
it was love from the first sight +1
3. Shes bisexual +1 (Yeah?...and that would make her a sue because...?)
4. She had sex with a cannon character +1
More than one cannon character +1
A character you would like to have sex with +1
Other
1. Shes a musician +1 (yesh)
A rock star +1
A dancer +1 (um, exotic dancer
A hacker +1
2. Shes better than a cannon character in some specific area he/shes good at [ex. better in taijutsu than rock lee, smarter than L, etc.] +1
3. Shes not from a country the story is taking place
she somehow popped in the fictional world from the real world +1
4. She doesnt have to pay for her actions/crimes/mistakes +1
5. Her enemies are complete opposites of her +1
6. She looks like one of the cannon characters/character from other anime +1
To the anti-sue traits!
1. Remove one point if your character is a smoker
2. She has a disease that doesnt heal during the story
3. Shes overweight
4. Shes in love with a character who doesnt love her back
5. Shes weak mentally or physically (A little low on the brain power, yes)
Results
0-5 points: The Anti-Sue
Your character is definitely an opposite of mary sue! Its obvious that youve been trying to protect your character from suedom, but a few more good traits wouldnt hurt.
5-15 points: Original Character
congratulations! Youve created an interesting, well-balanced original character! ^-^ You sure need a lot of skills to create such a great character, good job!
15-25 points: Boarding-Sue
hmm... I cant say your character is a mary-sue, but its really close to it! You should edit her a little to make her more realistic and interesting!
25-35 points: The Mary-Sue
My oh my, we have a trouble! D: I understand that you tried to create a nice and interesting character that others would like, but youve overdone it. Remember, a character has to have flaws! If you dont want to ruin your fanfiction, try to rework your character.
35< points: The Ultra-Sue
OH MY GOD, NOT THAT! BURN IT! Youve created a monster, my friend. Take a blank sheet and create another, more realistic character.
Riley Scored: 7.5 POINTS! Yay! Original Character!
Purple Out!
Devious Comments
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"Kala, you gone Jak crazy on me!" Dads saids
"Yeah, I gone Jak crazy on ya." JCF saids
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Insanity is the key to life, so GO CRAZY!!!
"It's not that I have to be right, I just love to prove people wrong." - Me
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"Kala, you gone Jak crazy on me!" Dads saids
"Yeah, I gone Jak crazy on ya." JCF saids
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