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Clean Up! (Mary-Sue Meme)

Mon Mar 9, 2009, 5:47 PM
  • Mood: Winter Downs
  • Listening to: Alanis Morisette - "Thank You"
Hi peoples! Sorry I've not been on for a while. I've been getting a lot of homework lately and my internet has been screwy. Anyways, I want to let you guys know I'm going to be cleaning out my favs and I'm sorry if I unfav any of your stuff, but it has to be done!

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Stole this from :iconjellybeandazzie:'s journal

Character on:
Riley


Basics

1. Does your character have a long, rare or unusual name? [ or if she has a name that reflects your own name] +1

Well its meant to be kind of alieny? +1


2. Does your character have more than one name they go by? [not counting nick names] +1



3. [count all that apply]
She`s not a human? +1 (Yep)
Half a human?
[half]An Angel?
[half]A Vampire? (Yesh)
[half]A Werewolf?


4. She belongs to a royal family? +1



5. Does she have amnesia? +1
It heals as the story goes on? +1



Looks

1. She has very long hair or hair with unusual color? +1
Is she blonde? +1



2. She has wings? +1


3. She is not overweight though she doesn’t look after what she eats/ doesn’t exercise +1


4. Her bra size is B ? +2 ( Wha? I don't specify my character's cup size!)



5. Does she belong to some kind of label? [ex. Punk, Goth, Lolita, Emo, Prep, etc.]+2



7. Do you describe her looks in the first chapter? +1
Do you use words "gorgeous" "mysterious" "stunning" "beautiful" "perfect" when describing her? +1 (uh...yeah ^^;)



Past

1. She had a terrible past +1 (yes)
and she angst about it +1 (yes! :cries:)


2. Is she an orphan? +1



3. Was she physically abused? +1
Mentally abused? +1
Raped? +1
All the other characters know that +1



5. She saw a death of her family member +1 (No, but of a close friend, yes)



Character

1. She has a very dark or very cheery character +1 (She's a little depressed at the moment, but that's not her usual self)



2. She has no enemies +1


3. She has no friends +1



4. She has a "big point of view" [ex. "It`s ok that my BF left me, there are so many other boys in the world"] +1



5. She has a best friend that stays that way during all the story?


6. Everyone who dislikes her ends up humiliated, arrested and/or dead +1
Killed by her +1
Killed by her boyfriend +1


7. She always understands others and gives the answer to any problem of their life +1


8. She shares same characteristics/hobbies with a cannon character +1


Romance

1. Your character seems to have more romance than all the other characters in the story +1 (well, yeah!)


2. Her boyfriend is a cannon character +1
more than one cannon character +1
a character from a cannon couple +1
a character you would like to have as boyfriend +1
it was love from the first sight +1



3. She’s bisexual +1 (Yeah?...and that would make her a sue because...?)



4. She had sex with a cannon character +1
More than one cannon character +1
A character you would like to have sex with +1



Other

1. She’s a musician +1 (yesh)
A rock star +1
A dancer +1 (um, exotic dancer :XD:)
A hacker +1



2. She’s better than a cannon character in some specific area he/she’s good at [ex. better in taijutsu than rock lee, smarter than L, etc.] +1


3. She’s not from a country the story is taking place
she somehow popped in the fictional world from the real world +1


4. She doesn’t have to pay for her actions/crimes/mistakes +1


5. Her enemies are complete opposites of her +1


6. She looks like one of the cannon characters/character from other anime +1


To the anti-sue traits!

1. Remove one point if your character is a smoker


2. She has a disease that doesn’t heal during the story


3. She’s overweight


4. She’s in love with a character who doesn’t love her back


5. She’s weak mentally or physically (A little low on the brain power, yes)


Results

0-5 points: The Anti-Sue

Your character is definitely an opposite of mary sue! It’s obvious that you’ve been trying to protect your character from suedom, but a few more good traits wouldn’t hurt.

5-15 points: Original Character

congratulations! You’ve created an interesting, well-balanced original character! ^-^ You sure need a lot of skills to create such a great character, good job!

15-25 points: Boarding-Sue

hmm... I can’t say your character is a mary-sue, but it’s really close to it! You should edit her a little to make her more realistic and interesting!

25-35 points: The Mary-Sue

My oh my, we have a trouble! D: I understand that you tried to create a nice and interesting character that others would like, but you’ve overdone it. Remember, a character has to have flaws! If you don’t want to ruin your fanfiction, try to rework your character.

35< points: The Ultra-Sue

OH MY GOD, NOT THAT! BURN IT! You’ve created a monster, my friend. Take a blank sheet and create another, more realistic character.


Riley Scored: 7.5 POINTS! Yay! Original Character! :boogie: (Wish I could say the same for the others -.-';)

Purple Out!

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aww Man

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"Yeah, I gone Jak crazy on ya." JCF saids
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Insanity is the key to life, so GO CRAZY!!!

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oh nevermind

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